Intro
(General facts)
It is implicit/ irrefutable that due to the modern lifestyle, fast-food has become a part and parcel of daily life. Numerous scientific researches have revealed time and again that junk food is inimical/detrimental/ pernicious to people’s health as it contains a lot of fats and salts which are detrimental to health.
(Paraphrasing)
Therefore a certain segment of the society believes that people should be educated and made aware of its ill effects. However, there is a counter argument that education serves no purpose in making people eat less junk food.
(Thesis statement)
Both the arguments need a proper scrutiny before forming an opinion.
Para 1(first/ former View)
(Main Idea)
Going with the first school of thought educating people about the damaging effects of junk food can help in reducing its use.
(Extending idea)
According to them lack of awareness is a big factor why people eat junk food. People actually don’t know what goes in the making of fast food. Fast foods are high in calories and low in nutrition. These foods are rich in harmful substances such as fat, salt, and sugar. Preservatives are also added in junk food.
(Supporting idea)
All these things can cause heart diseases, cancer, diabetes, and obesity. Obesity is one of the major health hazards in the world today. Therefore, it is imperative to reduce eating Junk foods for the healthy life. If people are warned about their bad effects, they would eat less of it. This can be done with the help of media such as TV which is ubiquitous nowadays.
Para 2(Second/latter view)
(Main Idea)
The opposite school of thought, however, deems that educating people will not serve any purpose because junk food is very cheap, tasty and readily available.
(Extending idea)
1. After a hectic days work no one is in a mood to spend time in the kitchen. Therefore, junk food is very convenient. It is also not very expensive and children love it.
2. What is more, fast food outlets spend a lot to lure people with their ads. What people don’t realize is that the celebrities they use in these ads hardly ever eat such food themselves and if they do, then they also spend hours working out in the gym every day.
Para 3 (your opinion)
1. After analyzing both sides of the argument, I believe that educating people can certainly help.
2. However, at the same time, if these fast food outlets can also be educated about making fast food healthier then it would be a great help. Strict rules should be laid down against using fatty acids and saturated fats. Whole wheat breads could be used instead of white breads. Use of preservatives should be lessened and juices should be served along with such foods instead of carbonated drinks.
Conclusion
(Concluding statement and restating opinion)
In the end it can be concluded that fast food is harmful still people eat it. Lack of time and lack of awareness seem to the prime cause for it.
(Suggestion)
Therefore, measures should be taken to educate people and to improve the fast food. We all know that ‘health is the biggest wealth’ one can have. Thus, people need to realise that in the pursuit of material wealth they can not afford to loose the real wealth i.e. health.
(General facts)
It is implicit/ irrefutable that due to the modern lifestyle, fast-food has become a part and parcel of daily life. Numerous scientific researches have revealed time and again that junk food is inimical/detrimental/ pernicious to people’s health as it contains a lot of fats and salts which are detrimental to health.
(Paraphrasing)
Therefore a certain segment of the society believes that people should be educated and made aware of its ill effects. However, there is a counter argument that education serves no purpose in making people eat less junk food.
(Thesis statement)
Both the arguments need a proper scrutiny before forming an opinion.
Para 1(first/ former View)
(Main Idea)
Going with the first school of thought educating people about the damaging effects of junk food can help in reducing its use.
(Extending idea)
According to them lack of awareness is a big factor why people eat junk food. People actually don’t know what goes in the making of fast food. Fast foods are high in calories and low in nutrition. These foods are rich in harmful substances such as fat, salt, and sugar. Preservatives are also added in junk food.
(Supporting idea)
All these things can cause heart diseases, cancer, diabetes, and obesity. Obesity is one of the major health hazards in the world today. Therefore, it is imperative to reduce eating Junk foods for the healthy life. If people are warned about their bad effects, they would eat less of it. This can be done with the help of media such as TV which is ubiquitous nowadays.
Para 2(Second/latter view)
(Main Idea)
The opposite school of thought, however, deems that educating people will not serve any purpose because junk food is very cheap, tasty and readily available.
(Extending idea)
1. After a hectic days work no one is in a mood to spend time in the kitchen. Therefore, junk food is very convenient. It is also not very expensive and children love it.
2. What is more, fast food outlets spend a lot to lure people with their ads. What people don’t realize is that the celebrities they use in these ads hardly ever eat such food themselves and if they do, then they also spend hours working out in the gym every day.
Para 3 (your opinion)
1. After analyzing both sides of the argument, I believe that educating people can certainly help.
2. However, at the same time, if these fast food outlets can also be educated about making fast food healthier then it would be a great help. Strict rules should be laid down against using fatty acids and saturated fats. Whole wheat breads could be used instead of white breads. Use of preservatives should be lessened and juices should be served along with such foods instead of carbonated drinks.
Conclusion
(Concluding statement and restating opinion)
In the end it can be concluded that fast food is harmful still people eat it. Lack of time and lack of awareness seem to the prime cause for it.
(Suggestion)
Therefore, measures should be taken to educate people and to improve the fast food. We all know that ‘health is the biggest wealth’ one can have. Thus, people need to realise that in the pursuit of material wealth they can not afford to loose the real wealth i.e. health.
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